雅思考試寫作高分技巧

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雅思寫作想要獲得高分的話,是有很多雅思寫作高分技巧是必須瞭解的,比如有的考生認為一直襬語法複雜的長難句秀“高階”就能獲得雅思寫作高分,但其實高分的雅思寫作是要長短句結合的,而這只是方法之一,下面就是小編整理的雅思寫作高分三項方法,希望對你有幫助。

雅思考試寫作高分技巧

 一、語序

從句不使用疑問句語序,而使用陳述句語序,即主語在前,謂語在後的順序排列。

錯例1:Can you tell me how many students are there in this class?

正解:Can you tell me how many students there are inthis class?

錯例2:They were more worried about how far did they have to walk to get to the trainstation and could they catch the train before it left.

正解:They were more worried about how far they had to walk to get to the train station and if they could catch the train before it left.

改錯練習:

1. It’s hard to decide when and where will we hold the sports meeting.

2. If you want to learn about the latest developments and discoveries from around the world, you will read about them in journals and research reports published in English, no matter whether are the scientists who wrote them from China or Norway.

二、主謂一致和冠詞的用法

錯例1:Apart-time job offers you chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.

正解:Apart-time job offers you a chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.

錯例2:Books are of the various kinds and have different contents.

正解:Books are of various kinds and have different contents.

改錯練習:

1. The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve.

2. The governments of all countries on this planet is beginning to realize the severity of water shortage.

三、固定搭配

對“to”的錯覺

1、介詞“to”

錯例:In addition to givea general introduction to computer, the course also provides practical experience.

正解:In addition to giving a general introduction to computer, the course also provides practical experience.

課程除了一般介紹電腦知識外,還提供實際操作的機會。

類似片語:

adapt to

due to

pay attention to

attach importance to

2、不定式“to”

錯例:People should be determined to holding on to this job whatever difficulties he might run into.

正解:People should be determinedto hold on to this job whatever difficulties hemight run into.

 附:

技巧一: 避免空洞的單詞和片語

1. 一些空洞的單詞或片語根本不能為句子帶來任何相關的或重要的資訊,完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子:

When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

這句話當中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多餘。完全可以去掉。改為:

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2. 有些空洞和繁瑣的表達方式可以進行替換,例如:

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help

their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at

this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達方式的例子,可以替換,簡化為下面的表達方式:

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

技巧二: 避免重複

1. 儘量避免重複使用同樣的詞彙。或者有的時候雖然詞彙沒有重複,但意思卻有重複。這時候可以做一些簡化的工作。例如下面這個例子:

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large 對一個farm來說就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改為:

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更簡潔的表達方式為:

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2. 有時一個片語可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換,例如:

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm。

這裡的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly,顯得更為簡潔:

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

技巧三:選擇最恰當的語法結構

選擇合適的語法結構可以使句子意思的表達更為精確和簡練。雖然語法的多樣性也很重要,但選擇最恰當的語法結構仍然是更為重要的考慮因素。以下原則是在考慮選擇何種語法結構時可以參考的原則:

1. 一個句子的主語和謂語動詞應該能夠反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如:.

The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study

engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

從意思上來分析,上面這句話需要表達的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”,而在表達這個概念時,原句用的主語是situation,謂語動詞是was,不能強調需要表達的重點概念,可以改為下面這句話:

My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

2.避免頻繁使用“there be”結構,例如下面的句子:

There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

可以改為:

My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

更簡潔的句式為:

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

3.把從句改為短語或單詞。例如:

Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers

from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

簡介的表達方式為:

The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

4.僅在需要強調賓語而不是主語的時候,才使用被動語態。例如:

In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.

本句不夠簡潔的原因是本句的重心應該是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather's family”,而使用了被動語態後,彷彿重心變成了cows和hay。下面的表達方式是主動語態,相對來說更簡潔一些:

In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

以上就是小編總結的雅思寫作高分技巧,提醒想要在雅思寫作方面獲得高分考生,一定要對這雅思寫作高分三項方法熟記於胸,寫作的時候也不要違背雅思寫作高分的三項方法。