2016雅思作文的連線詞作用

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大家知道雅思作文的連線詞作用嗎?下面小編整理了相關的資料,歡迎閱讀!

一、各種前後不一致

說話肯定前面說完了後面得跟上吧!比如:When one have enough money, she can do anything she want to do.

one是第三人稱單數,而且have應改為has; want應改為wants, 典型的主謂不一致,要改寫的沒改寫;

改為:When one has money, she can do anything she wants (to do).

二、中式思維要人命啊!

中式化。比如:There are many ways we get to know the outside world.

分析:“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outsideworld”。原本兩個句子很正常,但用中式思維把兩個句子一連起來,感覺就不對了,而且一種濃厚的中式鄉村英語範襲來;

改為:There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.

三、句子隨意新增

一般都是烤鴨們寫完了一句話之後,咦,不對,少寫了一些東西,得加上去,然後就出現了這樣的句子。

There are many way to get the news. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and soon.

其實也很好改,注意標點符號的使用,news後面加了點,就是句子的結束了,然後For還大寫,這樣後面就徹底成一個句子啦,不對;

改為:There are many ways to get the news, for example, by TV, radio, andnewspaper.

四、詞性用錯

這個還要解釋麼,大家經常犯的錯就集中在這裡

具體表現為:介詞當動詞用;形容詞當副詞用;名詞當動詞用等。

None can negative the importance of money. negative是什麼詞性呀,用到這裡了,應該用動詞:否定,deny!

五、指代不清

比如:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.

這個句子相當於“我是誰的誰的誰的誰”。考官看到直接就蒙圈了…

改為:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.

六、修飾詞錯位

英語與漢語不同,放錯一個位置,句子的意思就會完全發生變化啦!會造成了不必要的誤解。

比如:He believe him can do it well and he will better know the world outside the world.

分析:better位置不對啊,應該是 he will know the world outside the world better,放到最後。

七、用詞不當

比如:The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.

顯然,把obstacles“障礙”,“障礙物”誤作substance“物質”了。另外“the increasing use(不斷增加的使用)”應改為“abusive use(濫用)”。