Objective
A challenging Retail Management position in a fast-paced environment that will allow for personal growth and career advancement.
這句是寫得不錯的，當零售經理，你不怕挑戰，變化莫測的`環境你也不怕，但是你渴望個人提成的機會，看來是塊幹大事的料，至少有這顆心。
Summary of Qualifications
Retail Manager with experience with a major department store chain. Skilled at planning and budgeting; employee training; adherence to company standards; build good customer relations.
你看多簡潔，此人他本來就是經理，比較老練，但是她簡練準確的英語你可以學學的。能planning和budgeting了，那她應該是middle management這個層次了。後面的adherence to company standards用得多好，我們的孩子可能很多用obey company rules是吧
Notable Achievements
*Redesigned Kleins floor layout, resulting in a more attractive store and a 300% increase in customer traffic.
*Averaged 17% year-to-year sales increase.
Experience
Kleins Department Store, Beaverton, OR
Store Manager, 2005 - Present 這裡她不強調地址，強調職位
Increased sales volume by 150 % in less than three years. Designed more attractive merchandise presentation strategies and special marketing campaigns, resulting in increased store traffic and profits. Hired and trained sales staff. Increased store inventory and expanded merchandise purchases. Responsibilities included purchasing, merchandising, customer service, and all facets of running a department store.
Strands Department Store, Portland, OR
Mens Department Manager, 2003 - 2005她還是經理，多牛啊
Promoted from hourly position. Responsible for increased sales through use of aggressive city-wide marketing campaign and more attractive department layout. Daily operations included cash deposits and inventory control.
你看她是從計時工做起來的，中國話是說她從基層做起來的， 多少不容易啊！人家看了立馬感動！然後看，她做了city-wide marketing campaign，一個女的，能一大學畢業做全城的營銷活動，多少不容易！整體語言流暢、簡單、準確和專業，大家不妨學學！超級好的英語和表達。
Education
Portland State University, Portland, OR
B.A., Marketing, 2003 文科本科寫BA，理科寫為BSc，主流這麼兩種，其他再說
President, Society of Women in Business
她這麼能幹的人大學就提了這麼一個事，不過對應屆畢業生來說，這個不合適。要比她多。另外說明一點，中國大學生做英文簡歷，教育背景要往前面移，移到最前面，個人評價後面去，這是一個風格。另外一個風格是個人評價往後移，移到整個簡歷最後面，然後教育在前面。