好的英文求職信,直接反應了求職者的英文水平和個人能力,寫好求職信結尾也很重要,以下是求職信最常用到的幾句話:
一、求職 信的第一段說明寫信的目的,有些專家認為不宜用分詞句子,比如用下面的.句子做開頭,因為這樣的句子被人用得大多,顯得陳腐,失去特點。
下面二組例句的每一組裡面(1)句較差,經過修改後(2)句顯得比較恰當。
A:(1) Replying to your recent
advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of
sales manager.
(2) I am applying for the position of sales manager. I
believe my qualifications will
B:(1) I believe after reading
your advertisement in this mornings Journal that you are offering just the
opportunity I am looking for.
(2) Your advertisement in this mornings Journal for an
adjustment manager prompted me to apply for this position.
二、在提到希望得到的待遇時,可用類似句子:
Its hard for me to say what my salary should be set at,
but if pressed I would have to ask for a month as an initial salary.
I dont feel that I should set my own salary, as I am
happy enough to have the privilege of working for you. However, I would consider
a month satisfactory compensation for my apprenticeship.
三、提起或要求待遇時不要過分謙虛或表示歉意,下列句子不宜使用:
As for salary, I do not know what to say. Would $4,500 a
month be too much?
Do you think I would be asking too much if I said 5,000
dollars a month?
You know what my services are worth better than I do. All
I want is a living wage.
四、關於 求職
信結尾怎麼寫?下面也有二組例句。每一組裡面(1)句較差,經過修改後(2)句顯得比較恰當。
A:(1)軟弱、羞怯的: If you think I can
fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with
you.
(2)改寫後(較佳): If my qualifications meet your standards, I
would be happy to speak with you in person.
B:(1)懷疑,不妥、不安全的: If you are interested, please let me know
immediately, as Im sure an interview will convince you Im the man for the
job.
(2)改寫後:I would like
to request an interview. You can reach me by telephone at Beijing 123456 between
the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any
evening.