寫 求職 信的目的在於獲得職位，一封 求職 信無論如何文辭並茂，令人心動，公司HR主管不見到應聘者本人是不會給予工作機會的。因此， 求職 信的實際目的在於獲得面談的機會。許多人都會copy網上的 求職信 範本，導致千篇一律，這是非常不可取的。我們已經講過怎樣寫 求職信 ，這次我們來談談 求職信 寫作中容易被忽略的細節問題。
一、求職信的第一段說明寫信的目的，有些專家認為不宜用分詞句子，比如用下面的句子做開頭，因為這樣的句子被人用得大多，顯得陳腐，失去特點。
Replying to your advertisement...
Answering your advertisement...
Believing that there is an opportunity...
Thinking that there is a vacancy in your company...
Having read your ad...
再比較下面三組例句。每一組裡面(1)句較差，經過修改後(2)句顯得比較恰當。
A:
(1) Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager.
(2) I am applying for the position of sales manager. I believe my qualifications will meet your exacting requirements.
B:
(1) I believe after reading your advertisement in this mornings Journal that you are offering just the opportunity I am looking for.
(2) Your advertisement in this mornings Journal for an adjustment manager prompted me to apply for this position.
C:
(1) Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.
(2) In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. Please consider me an applicant for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified for this work.
二、在提到希望得到的'待遇時，可用類似的句子：
Id prefer not to set a salary, but since you ask, I consider 6,500 a month to be satisfactory.
Its hard for me to say what my salary should be set at, but if pressed I would have to ask for a month as an initial salary.
I dont feel that I should set my own salary, as I am happy enough to have the privilege of working for you. However, I would consider a month satisfactory compensation for my apprenticeship.
三、提起或要求待遇時不要過分謙虛或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用：
As for salary, I do not know what to say. Would $4,500 a month be too much?
Do you think I would be asking too much if I said 5,000 dollars a month?
You know what my services are worth better than I do. All I want is a living wage.
四、關於求職信的結尾用語，下面也有三組例句。每一組裡面(1)句較差，經過修改後(2)句顯得比較恰當。
A: